#revision
Developmental Edit — An Editor's Letter for Your Draft
Get an editor's letter on your draft: what's working, the one core issue, a structure map, where readers get lost, and a prioritized revision plan. Big-picture feedback, not comma fixes.
Nigel Yoshida
Scene Doctor — Goal, Conflict and a Turn
Find out why a scene falls flat and how to fix it. Checks goal, conflict, turn and stakes, flags pacing and telling, then gives a revision plan or a sample rewrite in your style.
Nigel Yoshida
Line Edit — Tighter Sentences, Same Voice
Tighten your writing sentence by sentence without losing your voice. You get the edited text, a change log with reasons, and the three habits behind most of the edits.
Nigel Yoshida